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Thursday 18 October 2012

One Scary Night

Eva walks through the wavy coconut trees near the box.Here runs Sam with his sweaty face from his morning run.They see the box and in big words saying ¨BEWARE DO NOT OPEN¨.They walk to it and read the note.¨DAMN¨ What is this box doing?¨ enquired Sam

Eva walks to it and opens it thinking, it was a trick from her little brother Gabby. They both get a big shock, like a tornado rushing through their faces.Eva looks with a ¨GASP”and a ¨Shiver.They looked like two stones waiting for someone to play with.



TO BE CONTINUED......



1 comment:

  1. Hi Tame'e It howard from Pt England School,
    I Like your story so far because it is really interesting.

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